Eddie Biggins

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  • Eric Spahn posted an update in the group Group logo of Song / Lyric FeedbackSong / Lyric Feedback 1 day, 14 hours ago

    Gettin older is just part of life, much of which can’t be explained. This is a song about my journey thus far 😉

    https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/UxVc6eMoaX87EGgM6

    “Gettin Older”

    C
    Got my first real gun when I turned 10
    F
    Daddy said it’s time I go with him
    C
    He handed me a beer when I was 15
    F
    Couldn’t come to tell him i’d just had 3
    G
    1 year…[Read more]

  • Hey yall! Hope everyone’s staying safe and doing well. I’m making it a goal to start doing more 3 or more person co-writes this next year. My strength is in Melodies. Would love to collaborate with lyricists, ideaists, and track writers. I’ve mostly focused on Worship/CCM, but always open for Country or Pop. If you want to read more about my stuff…[Read more]

  • Ed Barry posted an update in the group Group logo of Song / Lyric FeedbackSong / Lyric Feedback 2 days, 15 hours ago

    I’m pretty sure we all have said these words at least once in our lives?
    Woulda .. Coulda.. Shoulda
    Music and lyrics written by: Ed Barry © Copyright 2020 Ed Barry ALL RIGHTS RESERVED

    (verse)
    I like to think I’m determined .. To reach the goals I have come true…
    Compelled to make decisions .. W…[Read more]

  • Kirby posted an update in the group Group logo of Song / Lyric FeedbackSong / Lyric Feedback 3 days, 14 hours ago

    Newly written song – Many Hands, Many hearts; have changed some of the words already [but not re-recorded]. Is a simple iphone recording…] feedback & comments welcome; yes, I am a pollyanna! I’m wondering if I need to change the reconciliation line – to be more active – “let the ___ start…”…[Read more]

  • I am posting this in the hopes that I get some good feedback. I just started this song today and have an Idea of what I am looking for. Just not sure that I have the picture painted. Any how let me know kinda your thoughts. Structure is v c v c for now although the chorus is just holding you twice at the moment. Also think a 6/8 timing.

    Maybe,…[Read more]

    • It’s a mess I know but that is why I am hoping you guys can help.

    • What popped out on my walk. 🤷‍♀️

      Maybe baby we should stay out on this porch a little bit longer
      Maybe baby if you’re cold what would you say ‘bout sittin’ closer
      We’re no longer young
      and you know the night is getting older
      Lay your head down on my shoulder
      It’s a brand new moon
      And the stars are right for gently holding you

  • David Trionfetti posted an update in the group Group logo of Song / Lyric FeedbackSong / Lyric Feedback 1 week ago

    Happy Thanksgiving, Songwriters!

  • Mark Weaver posted an update in the group Group logo of Song / Lyric FeedbackSong / Lyric Feedback 1 week, 1 day ago

    This song has gone through several iterations. 2 Previous versions I entered into the contest. This is the 4th iteration. It’s written about a lost love (in my life). Looking for suggestions to improve on the lyrics. Thanks.

    TITLE: Memories, Sweet Memories

    CHORUS:
    Memories, sweet Memories
    Sitting by the pool
    Seeing you through the…[Read more]

    • Verse one sounds more current than the others. I like the reference to “apps on my phone.”

    • 5th iteration:

      TITLE: Memories, Sweet Memories

      CHORUS:
      Memories, sweet Memories
      Last so long after you’re gone
      Many things I liked about you
      Now, I spend my nights
      with the remote and a cold beer
      Oh, I wish you were here
      Summer nights and Winter days
      Oh, how I miss your gentle ways
      Memories, Oh so sweet Memories
      Last so long after you’re…[Read more]

  • Originally posted this in the Virtual Co-Write group. Can’t seem to get many replies over there. Thought I would cross post here.

    I would like some help writing lines for a song that centers around the idea of revisiting places/situations we’d rather not ever be in again. I recently drove through a stretch of interstate highway where my bro…[Read more]

    • You’ll see faces and traces
      Lights will dim
      Darkness will be all around you
      The sound of a cricket will make you come undone

  • John Sebby posted an update in the group Group logo of Song / Lyric FeedbackSong / Lyric Feedback 1 week, 1 day ago

    I hope this is received in the humor and fun I intended but realize this could be sacrilegious to some and taking the risk I may be asked to leave and not come back. I did my own version of Family Tradition by the great Hank Williams Jr. I rewrote the lyrics, to be sung to Family Tradition. My deepest apologizes to Hank Jr.

    My Family…[Read more]

    • “They throw their mother’s meat loaf recipe at me
      And yell, “preheat the oven to 350””

      I just spewed water all over my keyboard. You owe my employer a new laptop.

      • Kirstin, Very sorry to hear that, the song was meant to shower you with laughter, not your computer with water. Here is the first two lines of a song I wrote that may help you: No, no, I don’t want to grow up, I drink my whiskey from a sippy cup.

  • Kirstin Juhl posted an update in the group Group logo of Song / Lyric FeedbackSong / Lyric Feedback 1 week, 3 days ago

    Here’s what puked out onto the trail today during my lunch break. It will either edit/finish itself on a future hike, or die on the vine here. I never know…

    What do I say

    [V1]
    What do I say
    When I’ve nothing to say
    I thrash around in the exhaustion while I grasp at words to pray
    What do I do
    Don’t know what to do
    Inside the chaos of my jumbl…[Read more]

    • I would encourage you to edit and finish, as I enjoyed it.

      • Thanks John- it feels kind of cringy in places to me. I think I’m going to be able to get out and hike a bit today- I’ll see what happens. 😀

    • Ok John- thank you for making me step away for lunch and go on a hike. It’s less random and more coherent now, but still feels off.

      What do I say
      [V1]
      What do I say
      When I’ve nothing to say
      In the chaos of the striving all the words float far away
      What do I do
      I Don’t know what to do
      Turned around in the confusion ‘cause I don’t know how to wa…[Read more]

    • Ok so I looked at this and thought this on the first verse.

      What do I say when ther6e nothing left to say.
      What do I do when there’s nothing I can do.
      I’m tired and I’m down on my knees
      Praying God help me cause this world is breaking me.

      That is about where I got with it and messing around with the guitar.

  • Josh Lopez posted an update in the group Group logo of Song / Lyric FeedbackSong / Lyric Feedback 1 week, 4 days ago

    Still Working Out a Title for This One…

    Sitting in a railway station
    with my bags all packed
    I’ve got a one way ticket
    to go down the track
    Hear a whistle blowing
    It’s coming back for me
    I’m on a railroad ride
    Don’t know where the end is gonna be

    There’s a long black veil
    Hanging in the sky
    But I don’t look up
    And I don’t ask why
    Well thes…[Read more]

    • Very cool Josh! Really dig the idea. I’m a sucker for a train song 🙂 My only hang up is that you’re in the station in verse 1 and you’re asking the lord to take you to the station in the Chorus. Might be better to be on the train the whole time. That way you can’t get off. Makes the pleading to the lord more emphatic as a result. The train…[Read more]

      • Josh- I just played around with the opening lines a bit for a different cadence:

        Sittin’ in the station with my bags all packed
        Got a one-way ticket
        For passage down that railway track
        Hear that whistle blowin’
        Headed right for me
        Lord knows how long this journey takes
        Or where the end will be
        🤷‍♀️

    • I concur with Dean. I was really liking the idea of the song, but I got confused as to whether you were or were not on the train.
      I think sorting that out would make this a really intriguing song.

      • I read, “Sitting in the railway station” and my mind immediately went to –“Got a ticket to my destination’ -the first line of the hit song Homeward Bound by Paul Simon. You may want to change the first line into something like -I wandered into the railway station, not to confuse it with the Simon & Garfunkel song. Otherwise, I really enjoyed y…[Read more]

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